If I Died

[brittany9351]

Okay, this poem I wrote like half a year ago. It was about when people really disliked me, and I had no friends at all. It was back when I was emo, let's just say that. It's probably one of my poems that shows which people out of the ones I know who are the real friends or not. But yah, my opinions are no longer like this. I think differently now. I just have this poem still to save the memories.....




If I Died...
By: Brittany
If I Died...
I'm sure you wouldn't care.
And even If I was sprawled out on the cold ground,
Dying in front of you,
You wouldn't hold my hand,
and listen to my last breaths.
You wouldn't cry,
You wouldn't miss me,
Nobody would.
I need someone here.
To be here when I die.
Because I will surely do it,
There will be a time when I'll slip,
And the blade will miss,
and hit the vein.
And I will bleed....
And I will fall to that cold ground....
And when I'm sprawled out on that cold ground,
Dying in front of you,
Would you hold my hand,
and listen to my last breaths?

[Kakashi-Hatake]

It's a good poem, but your right babe, things are way different now!

[gbdefender65]

If I was there, I would help with what ever means I could do to save you.

[blackestluliby]

i think that many people would try to help you.
and no matter who you were on the outside, the inside always counts most.

i would help you.
and if you didnt live.....then i would grieve.



i like the poem though :-/

[penpatronus]

Yikes! Intense poem!

[brittany9351]

Heh, my poems that I can't post because of certain reasons are worse then that.